Friday, June 29, 2007

Aloy's first poem writing

Aloy was learning poem writing in english class this week and his homework was to write a poem. He has to write just one paragraph with 4 sentences. Since we were having so much fun figuring out rhyming words, I asked him to come up with another paragraph. hahahahha

Here's his creation:

"I wish upon a star
so that I could buy a car
to travel around the world
to find my precious pearl.

I wish upon a star
so that I could buy a guitar
to play a funny tune
for the looney toons."

1 comment:

Biscuit in Bali said...

haha.. aloy is quite good mrs sim! send a big birthday hug to ash for me.